Saturday, 25 September 2010

A short, creepy story

A man, at about the age of 30 went to a hotel and walked up to the front desk to check-in. The woman at the desk gave him his key and all, and told him that on the way to his room, there was a door with no number that was locked and no one was allowed in there. So he went to his room, and went to bed. The next night he was curious as to what was in the room, so he walked down the hall to where it was and of course tried the handle. Sure enough it was locked. So he bent down and looked through the keyhole. What he saw was a hotel bedroom and in the corner was a woman whose skin was completely white. She was leaning up against a wall and her head was facing the wall. He stared in confusion for a while then went back to his room. The next day, he went back to the room and looked through the keyhole. This time, all he saw was redness. He couldn’t make anything out, all he saw was red.

At this point he was confused and a little freaked out. He went to the front desk and asked the lady about the room. She sighed and said, "Did you look through the keyhole?" The man told her that he had and the lady said, "Well, I might as well tell you the story. A long time ago, a man murdered his wife in that room, and her ghost haunts it. But these people were not ordinary. They were white all over, except for their eyes, which are red."

31 comments:

  1. This stroy is kind of creepy, still a good one, I liked it!

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  2. Duuuuude ha, that was freaky shitballs

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  3. gyah thats like a text version of those annoying vids where something plays for a while and then you see some pictures of a zombie flash outta nowhere with a loud scream.

    that said, I like this far better

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  4. Post more of these creepy stories when you have time. Thanks.

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  5. I can remember when The Simpsons was a good show.

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  6. Not bad... Could definitely be scarier. Have you read that creepypasta about squidward's suicide? Pretty good stuff.

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  7. Wtf? I won't be able to sleep now

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  8. Aww man these things make me scared of the dark at night :|

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  9. You know, I like this because it uses suspense and engages you visually.

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